mmmm, i've been playing your hack, and i have to say that though the story is interesting, there's way too many gramatical and otographic errors, the most common being using the "your" instead of "you're", sorry to say it but that's like spitting in the face of language, you should correct that cause it will be more enjoyable for a player given the quantity of text there resides in a pokemon game. Another thing is, why did you use Red's sprite for Ash? they're too completely different characters though Ash is slightly based on Red, i think you should make a new unique Ash sprite. Apart from that, good story and development, Keep up with it!